If Neruda asks, “How long does a man live after all?”, (see: ma-quanto-vive-luomo ) Brian Patten (English poet and author born in 1946) provides us with a heartfelt answer in a poem taken from his “Armada” (1996).
By opening his piece with some lines taken from Neruda’s “¿Cuánto vive el hombre, por fín?”, Patten immediately establishes a link to the Chilean poet, but he goes farther and gives the simplest of answers: “A man lives for as long as we carry him inside us”.
How long does a man live after all?
A thousand days or only one?
One week or a few centuries?
How long does a man spend living or dying
and what do we mean when we say gone forever?
Adrift in such preoccupations, we seek clarification.
We can go to the philosophers
but they will weary of our questions.
We can go to the priests and rabbis
but they might be busy with administrations.
So, how long does a man live after all?
And how much does he live while he lives?
We fret and ask so many questions –
then when it comes to us
the answer is so simple after all.
A man lives for as long as we carry him inside us,
for as long as we carry the harvest of his dreams,
for as long as we ourselves live,
holding memories in common, a man lives.
His lover will carry his man’s scent, his touch:
his children will carry the weight of his love.
One friend will carry his arguments,
another will hum his favourite tunes,
another will still share his terrors.
And the days will pass with baffled faces,
then the weeks, then the months,
then there will be a day when no question is asked,
and the knots of grief will loosen in the stomach
and the puffed faces will calm.
And on that day he will not have ceased
but will have ceased to be separated by death.
How long does a man live after all?
A man lives so many different lengths of time.

Se Neruda domanda: “Quanto tempo vive un uomo, infine?”, Brian Patten (poeta e scrittore inglese nato nel 1946) ci fornisce una risposta sincera in una poesia tratta dalla sua opera “Armada” (1996).
Aprendo la sua lirica con alcuni versi tratti da “¿Cuánto vive el hombre, por fín?” di Neruda, Patten stabilisce immediatamente un legame con il poeta cileno, ma va oltre e fornisce la più semplice delle risposte: “Un uomo vive finché lo portiamo dentro di noi”.
Ma quanto tempo vive l’uomo, infine?
Vive mille anni o uno solo?
Una settimana o alcuni secoli?
Quanto tempo l’uomo trascorre a vivere o a morire
e che cosa intendiamo quando diciamo “andato per sempre”?
Alla mercé di tali preoccupazioni, cerchiamo chiarimenti.
Possiamo andare dai filosofi
ma si stancheranno delle nostre domande.
Possiamo andare da preti e rabbini
ma potrebbero essere impegnati nelle loro occupazioni.
Quindi, per quanto tempo vive un uomo, dopo tutto?
E quanto vive mentre vive?
Ci agitiamo e poniamo così tante domande –
poi quando si tratta di noi
la risposta è così semplice, dopo tutto.
Un uomo vive finché lo portiamo dentro di noi,
perché è per tutto il tempo in cui portiamo la messe dei suoi sogni,
per tutto il tempo in cui noi stessi viviamo
mantenendo i ricordi in comune, che un uomo vive.
Chi lo ama porterà il suo profumo, il suo tocco:
i suoi figli porteranno la forza del suo amore.
Un amico porterà i suoi ragionamenti,
un altro canticchierà le sue melodie preferite,
un altro ancora condividerà i suoi terrori.
E passeranno giorni con visi attoniti,
poi settimane, poi mesi,
poi ci sarà un giorno in cui non verrà posta alcuna domanda,
e i nodi del dolore si scioglieranno nello stomaco
e i visi gonfi si calmeranno.
E in quel giorno lui non avrà smesso di esistere
ma avrà smesso di essere separato dalla morte.
Quanto tempo vive un uomo infine?
Un uomo vive tanti periodi di tempo diversi.
(L.Z.)
Well explained.
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Thank you so much for saying so! I am really pleased that you liked it 🙂
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LUISA , on my keychain it reminds me that everyday, that Life is a gift & that’s why we call it the PRESENT .I’m guilty of thinking too much of the past and while I do this I’m loosing my future
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I love this verse:
“And the days will pass with baffled faces,
then the weeks, then the months,
then there will be a day when no question is asked,
and the knots of grief will loosen in the stomach
and the puffed faces will calm.
And on that day he will not have ceased
but will have ceased to be separated by death.”
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Thank you so much Tony! I am so happy and pleased that you enjoyed it.
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What a wonderful poem and one I was previously unaware of. Thank you for sharing this with us!
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I’m pleased that you enjoyed reading this poem. Thank you for your encouraging words.
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I did, very much! And you are so very welcome! Stay Well!
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Wow, this is wonderful! ✨
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I am pleased that you liked this poem too. I thought it was quite beautiful. Also, I would like to thank you for the kindness of your visit and for taking the time to comment.
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So, how long does a man live after all?
And how much does he live while he lives?
A great question that reminds me to live more vividly the present! Thanks, L.Z.!
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You’re right: we should all learn to live the present more intensely
Thank you so much for your great words and your support..😊😊😊
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Absolutely wonderful poem, very emotional!!! ❤️ I love it! ❤️
I send you a very big hug full of affection and have a great Sunday! 😘🤗♥️♥️🌹
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Thank you Ely, as always you are supportive and kind!🙏 💕 🙏 😘 🙏
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Thank you, Luisa, for giving us this wonderful poem by Brian Patten. I didn’t know him before but will see
If I can get hold of the book you mention. Neruda I have read some and he is among my favourites.
The question …’ How long does a man live ….is answered with such sensitivity and intelligence.
Miriam
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Dear Miriam, I really appreciate your kind words and I am glad you liked this post!
Have a happy day and stay safe. 🌼
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And I have bought the book now. 😊
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Bon dimanche, Luisa !
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Bon dimanche à toi.😊 🙏 😊
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Bella e vera questa poesia! Finché noi non permettiamo alla memoria di dimenticare la vita di un uomo, quell’uomo continuerà a vivere. Quando cade l’aereo sulla scuola di Casalecchio, il comune in cui abito da sempre, i ragazzi avevano scritto: se l’amore è vita, voi vivete per sempre. Poi ragazzi avevano la mia età. Sono ancora Vivi e lo saranno finché saranno ricordati.
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La memoria è questo: ricordare non significa portare nel cuore? … e finché abiteranno li i nostri cari vivranno con noi
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Bellissimo, grazie!
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ma che meraviglia Luisa questi versi, questo poi “Un uomo vive finché lo portiamo dentro di noi,” è favoloso! ma grazie grazie grazie
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Grazie a te, carissima amica. 🙏🏻😘 🙏
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Lovely. ❤
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Neruda! Che potenza! Statvagario, conosco, memoriale da isla negra, e altri che rendono il cuore. Sono come i cavalloni al mare.
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Che immagine meravigliosa!!!!
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I love this poem and have never heard it before. NIce!
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I’m really glad you liked it, too. I thought it was wonderful
Thank you for your lovely words
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Have a wonderful day. Happy September.
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Thank you, and the same to you 🌷🌱
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Che bella Luisa, mi sono commossa per la profondità del pensiero.
Vorrei condividerla, posso?
❤🙏
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Ma certo, Rebecca cara. E’ un onore!❤️😊
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❤ che cara persona che sei!…
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Lo sei anche tu… 💗
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Reblogged this on Rebecca's Light Scrive.
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This is a wonderful post sharing a poem I likely never would have found had I not read this post.
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Thank you so much for saying so! I am really pleased that you liked it 🙂
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Luisa ora vivrà un po’ con Rebecca poi …..io ho trovato un post di 4 anni fa di una blogger che ancora scrive e seguivo 7-8 anni fa!
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E’ vero, e per questo ringrazio Rebecca 🙂
Anche a me capita di leggere post di qualche anno fa e quando li commento gli autori a volte sono un po’sorpresi. A me invece piace ricevere commenti su articoli di qualche tempo fa, perché è un modo per farli rivivere, non pensi?
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Certo ricordare è rivivere. Pensa a Manzoni, Leopardi sono vivi
in altri. Immortalità laica ma sperimentabile se ci pensi
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e’ proprio così 📚📖📓📕
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Awesome.
Have a nice day Luisa😊
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I’m so glad you liked this post
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Your welcome Luisa ☺️
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Bojour madame,
All of your poems, articles everything are just splendid.
Thank you so much for this it made my day.
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I am flattered. You are so generous with your words. Truly happy and grateful. 🌹
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