Sogni sfilacciati
galleggiano sul guanciale.
Brandelli di realtà,
impigliati tra le ciglia.
Un ricordo lontano
guida la mia mano sulle lenzuola.
Ma nulla trova,
tranne il vuoto
Frayed dreams
Drift upon the pillow
Shards of reality
Entangle within the eyelashes
A distant memory
Guides my hand
Across the sheets
But finds nothing,
Only the void
Il vuoto ed il silenzio sono pieni dei nostri nostalgici ricordi.
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Tantissimi ricordi … un numero che diventa sempre più grande! Grazie Raffaele, e buona giornata 🌹
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I ricordi nessuno ce li tocca per fortuna
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No, nessuno… e a volte diventano quasi più tangibili della realtà
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Vero Lu
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La mano che invano cerca un profilo familiare ma accarezza soltanto un ricordo che dalle ciglia evapora e si fa sogno. Molto bella e struggente Luisa. Buona giornata 🌹
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Grazie, caro Achille… l’assenza a volte diventa così tangibile
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Thank you, dear Luisa, for your wonderfully observed and masterly versed reflections on life!
Joanna x
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Too kind of you, dear Joanna❤️❤️
I thank you wholeheartedly for your generous appreciation
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You are more than welcome, dear Luisa!
Joanna xx
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Bellissima…..❣️
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Grazie di cuore, cara Alessia🤍💗🤍
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Molto bella, cara Luisa 🌹❤️
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Felice che tu l’abbia gradita, cara Dani
Buon pomeriggio
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Buon pomeriggio ❤️😘
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Your words leave me pining for another hour of the void this morning. But I’m awake now!
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Thanks a lot for your brilliant comment! 🛌
Much appreciated
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Stupenda, cara Luisa 🌹
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Grazie, Marcello. Il tuo apprezzamento ha una grande importanza per me
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Troppo buona, Luisa 🙏🌹
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づ(๑ᵔᴗᵔ๑)づ
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Lovely, Luisa… a bit sad though, a longing for someone it sounds like. In my life, I try not to read sad things, why make myself sadder. As we grow older, so many changes that every morning I find we need to choose which road we take… the one to the left, sad and melancholy or the road to the right, happy, meeting new people and focused on seeing the beautiful flowers and hearing the birds chirping. It takes real effort sometimes to keep our mind happy. Who we choose to be around improves our mental state. This will make you smile. The other day, I had to go to the dentist. I LOVE my dentist, but he is retiring. Good news, his son is taking over, nice like the father. I went in for appt, having had a rough day at work. This young man has such a cheery, happy, exuberant attitude about life. That it was infectious. There are not a lot of people in life, who were born with a halo of sun around them. They are special people full of smiles and positivity. So nice!! Have a beautiful day!! The sun is shining. 💕🌺
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You are absolutely right, dear Monica. We should make an effort to keep our mind happy.
Unfortunately, with age, regrets, memories, nostalgias increase and sometimes they attack me suddenly, when I am most alone and defenseless, like during the night💕🌺
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I agree, I know, I go through this too… BUT I FIGHT those feelings with everything I have. My mother taught me LONG ago, when I was young, and would feel sad feelings about something that to focus on regrets, etc that we have NO CONTROL over is useless, it also makes our body sick. So, I learned that I’m in charge of my mind… do I want to continue to be sad/unhappy or do I choose to focus on happiness. Music, a funny show, a good book, positive affirmations, going outside, fresh air, they ALL can change our minds. I once read a woman who conquered sad feelings by saying to herself… NO, NOT TODAY, I’m not going down that bad road. JUST FOR TODAY, I’m going to be happy. She would have to repeat this many times, UNTIL the sad thoughts would leave. It was her form of meditation. I found it works for me to. NOT TODAY… I will repeat that over and over and FOCUS on happy thoughts. Sending you a HUGE hug!! Sadness, loneliness, depression, it’s REAL… it takes such EFFORT to CONQUER it and live a HAPPY life. BUT I feel our children want to see us as lively people, not sad ones, right. And we would not like to see them sad, so it goes both ways. I ask myself… How would I help my children? THEN I must help myself in the same way. I can’t attach a photo, but last night I went walking and saw such beautiful PINK tulips. It was the evening, they were going to sleep.. I smiled, this put me in a happy mood. Little things make us happy if we are open to them. 💕🙏🌺
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Thank you very much for your precious reflections and advice, dearest Monica.
I will try to put them into practice, when I am assailed by sadness. Starting from now, I will repeat to myself “Today I’m not going down that bad road. Today I’m going to be happy”
(●’◡’●) ❤️ *** THANKYOU *** ❤️
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It WORKS… it’s a MANTRA… you will have to repeat it at first many times, saying it FIRMLY…use your Italian hands. LOL, you know we talk with our hands. Oh, since your English is perfect. Here are a few people I often go to for upbeat messages, they are on Youtube: Louise Hay (motivational speaker, many positive affirmations) Sonia Choquette… and this one, his audio messages, my daughter and I like when we need them is Joel Osteen. I go walking and listen to him. He’s very up beat. You know how it is, these might not be for you, but you might like one, that is good. 💕 Sharing is caring, right. Oh, I also listen to Oprah’s Soul Sunday on Spotify when I am walking when I need up lifting messages.
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Thank you very much for these additional suggestions: I’m going to YouTube to look for these people 🙏🌹🙏
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One more… “When God Winks,” by Squire Rushnell. Such a nice uplifting book, I listened in audio. 💕 Have a BEAUTIFUL day!
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Thank you again: I’ve found all of them on YouTube, and I’ll listen to their messages
Enjoy the rest of your week!
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💐
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Bellissima Luisa, bellissima come il tuo cuore!!!❤️❤️
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Grazie, Vitty carissima
Buon pomeriggio💞
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Beautiful imagery, as delicate as this delightful poem, Luisa.
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So glad you appreciated it, dear Pat 🙏❤️🙏
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Anche l’immagine è stupenda!!!
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Grazie, carissima Augusta!!!
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molto bella, grazie per averla scritta Luisa
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Lucia carissima! Il tuo apprezzamento è un dono prezioso 💞
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hai fatto centro
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Grazie ancora, carissima Lucia 🙏💗🙏
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Beautiful poem!
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Thank you very much, dear Jay 🌹
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Lovely words Luisa, but they sound like sad ones 💙
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Indeed, the emptiness I feel is sometimes more oppressive than a boulder. 💗
How are you, dear Malc?
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I’m so sorry to hear that Luisa. As for me, I think I’m starting to make some progress, but please don’t get too down. That won’t make me feel any better 💙
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Thanks for the encouragement, my dear friend
Enjoy the rest of the week 💗
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Enjoy the weeken Luisa! 💙
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🌷💗🌷
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versi raffinati che ti rubo per il Domenicale del 28 aprile
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Ma grazie, caro Flavio! E’ un vero onore 🙏💗
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dovresti cimentarti più spesso
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Ci sono così tanti ottimi poeti tra i nostri amici, che io quasi mi sento imbarazzata a proporre i miei testi
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beh, direi che pecchi di umiltà
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( •̯́ ₃ •̯̀)
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Il momento del risveglio, quando la realtà ti assale, a volte, con tutta la sua tristezza. Bello Luisa…🦋🩵
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Proprio così, quando sei inerme contro i demoni del ricordo
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Well penned Luisa. It evokes a lot of emotion, including sadness and regret. Waking up alone can be tough to take. Have a good Thursday. Allan
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Thanks for appreciating and sharing your thoughts, dear Allan🌺
Wishing a good Thursday to you too
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Molto bella – I understand this grief🥀💙
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So glad to receive your appreciation and to hear that my words resonate with you! ❤️
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MI STA MANGIANDO VIVO
Mi sta mangiando vivo, e lo sai:
al mare non mi parli e ti sdrai
lontan dall’ombrellone mio assai,
il che non era accaduto mai.
Chi ti starà mangiando tu ti chiedi.
Ma come fai a non capirlo? Siedi
distante sì, ma pure ben lo vedi
che solo come il cucco sto. Che credi?
Che in spiaggia io per altri vengo?
Non l’hai compreso che solo a te tengo?
Che sol con te voglio parlare? Spengo
e accendo il cellulare in quanto spero
che possa almeno tu chiamarmi, in vero
mi sta a mangiar la noia per intero.
Se non la scacci tu mi farà nero!
Ti spegne lontananza come un cero,
sia di presenza, e se sei d’accordo
puranco la mattina nel ricordo.
(Cassandro)
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Grazie per aver condiviso questa preziosa poesia, Cassandro carissimo🙏
Ti auguro una buona serata
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Oh, I love this, Luisa. I can relate to your profound words.
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I’m really happy that you found my words relatable and I thank you for letting me know 🌹
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My pleasure, dear Luisa.
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Such a profound poem, my dear Luisa, clearly written by someone capable of deep feeling and beautifully expressing their feelings through the medium of poems.
We are all linked by a sentimental relationship that connects us with the ties of humanity. We are similar because we go through the same joys and sorrows, through the same illusions and disappointments. The supreme law of living makes us equals, and to a greater or lesser degree, we all feel euphoria and depression, sadness and happiness, hope and disappointments.
Thanks for sharing, and have a wonderful day 🙂 Love from Ireland 🙂 Aiva xx
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Thank you, dearest Aiva, for your kind words of appreciation and, above all, for the wonderful message you sent, which gave me comfort and which I can relate to
🙏🤗🙏🤗🙏
Sending lots of love from Italy
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🤎🤎🤎
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Delicata e raffinata questa visione del dispiacere della solitudine ❤️🥀👏 Buon proseguimento di giornata cara Luisa 😘
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Grazie per le tue care parole, amica mia
Ti auguro una bella serata 🌹💞🌹
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Très joli !
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Un immense merci, cher Jean-Louis 🌹🙏🌹
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Beautiful my friend but with that sadness that touches the heart xxxxxx
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As always you are very kind, dear Shey, and I thank you warmly
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Listen…this was so heart touching, truly xxxx
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Thank you again, my dear friend 💞
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Bellissima!!
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Ti ringrazio molto, Daniele❣️
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BUONA SERATA LUISA
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molto molto profonda come dei resto sei tu 🌹❤️
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Ma che bellezza Luisa, complimenti…velata di intima tristezza, s’impossessa del lettore portandolo via con se, così io.
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Molto bella, malinconica e reale.
Brava Luisa, ti abbraccio
Adalgisa
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Un abbraccio affettuoso 💞 per te, Luisa carissima.
Anche io, da molto tempo, avverto un forte senso di vuoto.
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Grazie per essere riuscita a immedesimarti nel mio sentire, carissima Valy 🌷🌷🌷
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È da un po’ di tempo che percepisco il tuo sentire, Luisa carissima e mi dispiace tantissimo. Sappi che ti sono tanto vicina! 💐💞🌷
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Grazie ancora!
Ti voglio bene 🤗
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Grazie a te, ti voglio bene anche io! 🤗
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Un po’ triste
Notte
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Purtroppo…
Buona giornata a te, caro Alle 🙏🌷
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As one who has lost several partners in the past, this poem and its image moved me.
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Thank you for telling me that these words have meaning, unfortunately a sad meaning, for you too💔
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Oh, boy, you really have the poet’s gift for bringing the reader into the greatest possible emotional understanding in few words! Even I am a blabbermouth next to your elegant efficiency! Brava!
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Thank you for your appreciation, dearest Ana. 🙏💞🙏
Coming from an accomplished poet like you, it has immense value for me
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It is all I have to give!
Cleo giggles, and says that we two are like children at your knees.
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Thank you again!
You’re too kind
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One senses the loss and broken heart in the poem. So sad.
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I thank you wholeheartedly for your generous appreciation, dear Tanja 💗
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A sad but beautiful poem
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Thank you, Thomas, for your kind comments! Your words are greatly appreciated
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Powerful!
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Thank you!
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So sad reflecting life to read 😞🙏💗 such a defeated dream 🛌 all hope is broken and no value of truth ,
With great sadness and depression can read the lines 😞👏 So beautifully written and so graceful
Wishes my great friend 🌹🙏🌹💕
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Thank you very much for appreciating my short poem and for fully understanding its message
🌹🙏🌹
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Thank you so much for likes and comments feed back 🙏🌹👍🏻
Most welcome and happy weekend my lovely friend 💕👏
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💗🌹💗
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versi delicatamente tristi…
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Grazie, Cinzia, per il tuo gentile apprezzamento!
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[…] Risveglio/Awakening […]
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Thank you so much, as always, for linking and reblogging this post on your website 💗
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So beautiful and yet so sad.
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Thanks a lot for your kind comment 🌹
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Quando ci si risveglia cercand il compagno che non c’è più.
Serena serata Luisa
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😒😒😒
Buona serata, Gian carissimo ❣️
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Bella poesia, struggente da far male. ♥️
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Ti ringrazio sentitamente per averla apprezzata ❣️💗❣️
E’ la vita che fa male, anche perché pochi conoscono bene le istruzioni per l’uso
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I feel a deep void at times but would immediately stand up and do something to take my mind off of it. 😊
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I think yours is the best behavior to do👍
Wishing you a happy Sunday❣️❣️❣️
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Reading this so late. Much love to you, Luisa! 💞
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Thanks so much for your kind comment! 🌹
Really appreciated
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gorgeously penned 💕
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Happy to know you liked it 🙏
Thank you very much for your appreciation💗🌹
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You’re so very welcome. It was my pleasure💕
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🙏💞🙏
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Un risveglio triste e freddo senza la persona che dovrebbe accoglierti tra le braccia e riscaldarti col suo Amore. Può essere un ricordo o un’ attesa sperata…Un letto vuoto e lenzuola fredde e il cuore ancora colmo d’ Amore all’ orlo per un risveglio deludente e un’ aspettativa sperata e voluta.Ciao Luisa, buon pomeriggio carissima, un abbraccio forte 🫂💞🌷💚
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Grazie di cuore per questa tua riflessione, profonda e partecipe.❣️💐❣️
Buona serata, Desire cara
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[…] Risveglio/Awakening […]
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Grazie di cuore 🙏💙🙏💙🙏
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Lontananza che cerchiamo di riempire con i nostri sogni Avvolte riuscendo, Avvolte no.
Molto sentita cara Luisa. Buona giornata 🙏🌷
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Ti ringrazio di cuore per le tue parole gentilissime, Frida
Buona domenica a te 🌹
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Grazie a te
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